The artwork was wonderful, and the story was quite good. I do agree though, the ending was forced, and was not well finished, in the way you would end something. Also, the way the boy reacted was really confusing, until you realize it's a soap opera. I would suggest some more sadness to prompt the reaction. That's all!
Other than what's up there, the flash was quite good, as well as animation, so keep up the good work!